• Home

Write-Lifting

Exercising Write

Feeds:
Posts
Comments
For My Trumpet Man »

55 Flash Fiction ~ Skip It

2011/10/14 by Charlene L. Amsden

After Jack’s family moved from Australia to America, Jack came home within an hour of being left in his first grade classroom. “These yanks are mental,” he said. “I ain’t no sheila and I’m not going back!”

“Whatever happened?” His mum asked.

“Teacher says I gotta skip to the loo!”

~*~

In memory of G-Man’s 55 Flash Fiction Friday. [Write a story in exactly 55 words.]

Posted in writing exercise | Tagged humor, puns | 14 Comments

14 Responses

  1. on 2011/10/14 at 6:00 am izzy

    Oooh my my- sly-


  2. on 2011/10/14 at 6:32 am brian

    haha…lost in translation…and fairly funny…have a great friday! smiles.


  3. on 2011/10/14 at 8:00 am Alice Audrey

    LOL! Oh, I can totally see that.


  4. on 2011/10/14 at 8:37 am Anthony North

    I'm singing the sequel. Nice one 🙂


  5. on 2011/10/14 at 8:58 am Eric

    Well, it helps to skip to the loo when you've gotta go badly – LOL! Cute 55, Charlene!


  6. on 2011/10/14 at 9:08 am Monkey Man

    Good one. I always like those 55's that give me a smile and a chuckle.


  7. on 2011/10/14 at 10:43 am G-Man

    The name and surroundings may be different__The the Groan never changes.!__But…I Loved your 55__Welcome back, thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End


  8. on 2011/10/14 at 11:25 am Cherie

    LOLOL That's great. If he's supposed to Skip to "my" Loo, shouldn't he have gone home to use the facilities anyway? 🙂


    • on 2011/10/14 at 2:16 pm Charlene_Amsden

      Good point, Cherie!


  9. on 2011/10/14 at 6:06 pm kcinnova

    *smirk*


    • on 2011/10/16 at 10:44 am Charlene L. Amsden

      Yep, that’s the reaction I wanted.


  10. on 2011/10/14 at 6:40 pm Mama Zen

    Haven't changed a bit! Fabulous 55!


    • on 2011/10/16 at 10:41 am Charlene_Amsden

      Thanks, Mama Zen!


  11. on 2011/10/15 at 4:45 am Jamie

    Very nice, made me smile.



Comments are closed.

  • Translate

  • About Charlene

    me

    Email me!

  • Recent Posts

    • The Old Lady and The Clothes Shrinkers
    • All Signed Up!
    • For My Trumpet Man
    • 55 Flash Fiction ~ Skip It
  • Recent Comments

    • Charlene L. Amsden on The Old Lady and The Clothes Shrinkers
    • Charlene L. Amsden on The Old Lady and The Clothes Shrinkers
    • Tsduff on The Old Lady and The Clothes Shrinkers
    • Amoeba on The Old Lady and The Clothes Shrinkers
    • Barbara H. on All Signed Up!
  • Archives

    • March 2019
    • October 2011
  • Meta

    • Log in
    • Entries RSS
    • Comments RSS
    • WordPress.org

Get a free blog at WordPress.com

Theme: MistyLook by Sadish.